Thursday, December 31, 2015

The Eye Comments

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Eye alive if not seen
'Life Necklace' i put on neck
The beads riffle
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Lionara S.t.m.o.l
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Soran M. H 16 September 2020

Insect started the game of knowledge? It was mosquito or slow worm The spark of thought in the eye came ......... good to read you as a different and insight style, thanks

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Soran M. H 16 September 2020

In this surrealist poem, small creatures and then the vast universe were employed to convey the message of poetic creativity. It is a text with many connotations and meanings. It needs more than one reading to reach its depth

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