She is lying hidden
Inside a pear-shaped shell
A rough, rock-hard outside
So porcelain white inside
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The lines are as extraordinary as the extraordinary kindness.My reverence to u Mam.
This is an amazing work....... profound indeed.....thank u.....
The kind gesture Turned into an exquisite treasure A gem so marvelous A pearl so precious........An exquisite poem that i can read again and again. Happy New Year Rose. With warmest good wishes and regards.
This is an outstanding piece.....enjoyed it....thank u dear poetess....
A gem so marvelous A pearl so precious. A poetic gem, indeed! Thank you my friend Rose....10
2) I have surely enjoyed each time I reread this gem, this Masterpiece, my dear great Poetess!
Of course my dear great Poetess, in my previous comments/responses, while writing I had not put my 10. Now it is 5 Stars full on Top, AND to my Favourites. Truly a gem of a poem, about that precious perfect pearl
An astoundingly beautiful work! So delicate and crafted it tskes a true poet to find something as common as an oyster and trenscend it into a detailed work of art. I wish i could write like this! ! Well done Rose Marie
The kind gesture/Turned into an exquisite treasure/A gem so marvelous/A pearl so precious....precious words! I love reading this valuable piece of work of high impact and great influence time and again with enormous joy!
A magnificent poem! Brilliantly penned......my great pleasure reading this fabulous work time and again!
Brilliant poem. Brilliant title. Beautiful and brilliant imagery. Thank you for sharing this beautiful and captivating poem Rose Marie.10+++ and added to my poem list. One to share with loved ones. Thank you so much Rose Marie.
An ordinary phenomenon of the sea life into a beautiful poem, so well-crafted. This is what Rose Marie, a poet, is.
The invader sand that got into the oyster was never driven out or ejected ! 'Instead it was coated And treated With warmness And kindness.'..... Finally the sand that first irritated the tender body of the oyster, through her patience and forbearance was turned into a priceless pearl....! You have beautifully condensed the story of this great transformation! A sure 10
The kind gesture Turned into an exquisite treasure A gem so marvelous A pearl so precious.....nice concluding. A poem with lofty theme. Thanks again for this gem.
I was attracted by the title of this poem, and after reading it, I realised the great analogy, and the context in which it is used: kindness, it is as a pearl. A wonderful and original poem!
"The kind gesture Turned into an exquisite treasure"