Monday, August 5, 2013

The Extant Song Comments

Rating: 4.8

With whom I dive below the sky
In the silver rain like a tranquil cry
Into golden seas - beyond the glow
I hear her eyes singing lullaby.
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Deniz Atay
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Godfrey Morris 11 November 2016

A beautiful poem about the innocence of love. You have written a gem. Good job.

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Charles Darnell 19 September 2013

Enjoyed your poem.

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Dave Walker 05 August 2013

A really great poem, like it, a great write.

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