The Exquisite Prison Comments

Amazing write, Charles... eye-opening and profound. Great ending! Brian

Charles: This poem is a treat for the senses. You paint your characters so vividly and get us to care about the small details of their existence. You celebrate the human. This is beautifully realized. Shalom! Hugh

I really enjoyed this poem. You dont come across a poem very often, that tells a story so transparently and still is rhythmic and poetic as this. Keep up the good work.

that's a really cool poem.