The Expression Of Love Comments

Yes so true, when love speaks the music we here is exquisite and the expression profound. I can feel the oneness in your poem the beauty of life and power of love. Beautiful. love love love! :)

Fine poem. Congratulation. I invite you to read my poem and comment. Yours Gajanan Mishra

Absolutely lovely... I loves this poem... beautiful description of nature... A lovely write :)

I agree with Steven Cooke on that you shouldn't abbreviate words. Other than that this is a mmoving and heartfelt poem that I adore, bravo!

Very moving poem indeed i congratulate you for such writing, , , , , , , , good expression of love good imagination good choice of words excellent poem i like it good luck wth your next poems Guess Who

i like this poem.The line make my heart go insane is cliche and I would change. I would also refrain from abreviations such as n wide when you mean and wide. U when you mean you. Good english makes good poetry.

Sweet write...thanks for inviting to read this the title was good and i am gonna think something i want try to write it as my own This love Exist unseen but real Comes to you without noticed like a wind to touch clothes we dance in the air Flagging our love Because of you we now shared because without you this love still unseen now everything showing all A flag of love swimming in the air Prove to all my love is real Exist but unseen If only the really can see and feel it was a rough and raw write but i just try do it instantly please dont compare to your nice poetry...yours just well done! _Unwritten Soul

Summer rain is a bliss to enjoy indeed!

Good imagery.Very nice poem!

Its really wonderful! ! ! ! If i combine all realms of nature, The only person whom i feature......... I could actually sense the presence.... just awesome.. keep it up

its very sweet i like it

cool, really awesome check out some of mine and honestly let me know what you think, been writing for a year now...

I think its beautiful but you are overusing the art of 'rhyme' in your work, try to mix words a little, twist the english, you know in poetry senteces don't have to be in gramatical order, use other style like symbolism too, n your work will be exemplary

I find it no less than awesome. Moreover, I'm short of words to express my feelings over it. Dil jeet lia apne.

Now this is more like it. I can't stop missing you has the structure, but this has the beat. It has the sound, and it has the soul. It is brilliant, so fast and rhythmic, with flying colours shouting love and spirit. i love it, I think it is a work of art

beautiful piece! keep them coming

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This is a wonderful poem. You illustrate a beautiful picture. Nice words.