Friday, October 14, 2011

The Expiating Beauty Comments

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Terrible was the onslaught
On passers, by her beauty spot.
Marvelous were her curves
Lovers adulation she deserves.
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Ratnakar Mandlik
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Edward Kofi Louis 20 June 2019

" Lovers adulation she deserves" ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 December 2015

Marvelous were her curves Lovers adulation she deserves. Had her beauty committed sins, Compelling her for an expiation! . Beauty, sin, temptation, all those ideas come in directly or indirectly in your poem. thank you very much . tony

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Valsa George 03 December 2015

Is she Helen of Troy, Cleopatra, Merlin Munroe or our Aiswarya Roy.......? Who ever she is, she is a paragon of beauty, I am sure! Great description!

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