Friday, December 14, 2007

The Expectation`s Of The First Date. Comments

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I`m waiting for the date to arrive at mine
smartly dressed, teeth that shine
expectation`s are truely high,
loads of wine the date should fly
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Ricky Owen
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Ernestine Northover 31 December 2007

Such anticipation, I remember it all so well. Very well written piece. Keep writing. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Effie Yalena Steyn 14 December 2007

Beautiful, but has yet to happen to me! Good for you if you have had that. Keep it up. Effie xx

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Ian Bowen 14 December 2007

Nice imaginative piece of writing. Well done.

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