~the Exiled Queen~ Comments

How rich and decadent these words are. There is a lot to be taken away from this - thanks!

Your girls tell you true, your depth is sometimes beyond. I know that may make no sense to your readers but it does to me and you. Awesome write

This poem was interesting. It caught my attention. Specifically when you said: Salvage the beauty of your ignorance. While you caress the innocence. Of letting go, security brings comfort. To the lost that found answers. All of this poem was very good, but your first stanza was my favorite. Excellent job.

I am dissecting this poem...the first stanza tells, that there is beauty and happiness both in innocence and ignorance, like: the less you know, the happier you can be. But, only by losing yourself, you can find answers about yourself, as they say. This poem, is a kind of dialogue between a spiritual mentor and a disciple, teaching technics to self-discovery. The last two stanzas though, are different...there is love, pain and the last line is heart-touching. A great poem.