The Exile Comments

Poignant. I am bound to share your feelings. I know what people of our and older generation has gone through. You have rightly said soul of such dignified people had already died when forced to leave Kashmir. The poem truly brings out your anguish and pain which only a poet can describe who has gone through the turmoil alongwith his/her elders. Thanks for sharing. Happy writing.

A lovely description of man's story started in paradise and still continued on the earth. Beautiful and attractive.