Sunday, October 25, 2015

The Execution Comments

Rating: 4.0

Here they come
the frequent trespassers of this terrain
in their tattered truck
The heavy black boots
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Nizar Sartawi
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Rajnish Manga 25 October 2015

It looks like an eye witness account of a cold blooded murder. Yes, the murder of a tree. Thanks for such a phenomenal poem.

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Nizar Sartawi 26 October 2015

Such a warmly-written comment, apparently by a person who passionately supports the preservation of our planet ransacked by the enemies of nature.. and humanity too.

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Paul Warren 25 October 2015

Man against nature and killing something that can be converted into money. Thankyou

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Nizar Sartawi 26 October 2015

Yes Paul, man against nature, regrettably when man has no reason to be in that position.

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Nizar Sartawi 26 October 2015

Just I want to add a couple of words by Zulfa, my wife sitting beside me: Man against himself, she suggests.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 October 2015

Wisely and nicely depicted with marvellous collocation. An intensive poem I like most. Thanks for sharing. - - -10

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Nizar Sartawi 23 November 2016

Thank you Kumarmani. Happy that you like it

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Nizar Sartawi

Sarta, Palestine
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