Tuesday, September 4, 2018

The Evil Roommate Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was very busy unpacking my stuff,
Not to mention my toys and books,
Suddenly the door banged open to reveal a stranger (named Park Min-Jae)
Who continued to shoot me dirty looks.
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Projeeta Ghosh Biswas
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Dr Antony Theodore 19 September 2018

For a 12 year old this is a marvellous step..... a great poem. imagination, dream, expressions, just fine.. thank u. tony

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Projeeta Ghosh Biswas 20 September 2018

Thank you! ~

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Jazib Kamalvi 19 September 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Moon G. B. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Projeeta Ghosh Biswas 04 September 2018

I am a 12 year old who loves to write poems. I hope you like this poem. It is quite silly though hahaha!

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Naila Rais 04 September 2018

I loved it and I am 13....thnx for sharing this sweet piece... You may like to read my poems too.. Naila

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