~~~ The Everlasting Smile ~~~ Comments
She greeted everyone with a beaming smile -
the smile of joy, the smile of affection -
that could transform the gloomiest gesture
into an aura of joy.
...
Read full text
A child's love towards her teacher is vividly expressed. Being a teacher I thoroughly enjoyed reading. Her untimely departure has created a void but life has to move on.She must have been a great person to evoke such emotions in her student.May her soul rest in peace. Thank you.Keep writing.You have that talent.
A beautifully and serenely expressed tribute, to a very very special teacher, I think! You do have the gift of expression! All the best!
This is really a kind of eulogy. Written well, as most are. The important thing in this piece is the title and the closing with the title. This closes the circle. That is what gives it my normal high score of 9. Wonderfully done. GW62
wonderful and sensitive poem I expect to see more from your pen in times to come
...Not that we loved her less but God loved her more... good lines these... good sincere heart felt write...
strong poem.....the power of the smile..leaves an impression on the heart and soul..not just in the mind.....clear remarkable composition..nicely penned best wishes Jon
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
7/28/2025 10:05:39 AM # 1.0.0
A great start with a nice poem, Aswathi. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks