The Everlasting Prayer Comments

it's glad to know that there are poets who accepts Jesus as their savior. i hope everyone of us realizes that our talent comes from him...

Well-written very sincere indeed

a sincere and a blessed one!

I was a young child lost traveling down the wrong path And now I'm a young man asking for directions Trying my best and hardest to get on the right path Telling everyone not to throw stones if you have sinned yourself Hoping that others can relate and help me through my troubles times And always keep me in their prayers as I keep them in mine In Jesus name I pray this everlasting prayer. Amen. How poignant these lines are! Your poem drives home the importance of self-introspection. A very honest and well-structured write. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing. Cheers!