Saturday, July 31, 2010

The Everlasting Battle Comments

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I've held you so close,
that it may have hurt me.
the damage can never be undone.
all good things are now broken.
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Xixi Cape
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Kevin Carney 07 August 2010

Nice write, I like the way it flows. I really like the line 'flaming photographs, fill an empty room' then going into 'light up the murky atmosphere'. Really thoughtful write.

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