Under an olive tree
On the shore of sea
Hand in hand eye in eye
We used to sit, long back
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was a like a song in the sea shore...brought to me memories of the past...beautiful very romantic....10
very romantic, nostalgic poem Kesav. its so beautiful going down memory lane and try to recapture those utterly blissful momemts of first flush of love. its very lyrical in content and composition. loved it 10 Mamta
its a wonderful piece abt one's love and sweet rememberence abt the air that fills the environ of the special moments one spend! ! ! !
the memories of love are always evergreen......a beautiful write..10
Those beautiful moments of intimate love....certainly remains evergreen, through the times.....refreshing our thoughts, re-inventing the lost glory of then innocent love, everytime our mind resorts to its shelter......A superb write! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! u set the mood alright.................beautiful..........
lovely piece.. beautiful picture...sweet song merging in your piece.. a wonderful memories....worth remembering until the end of time... the remnants are still there...a living remembrance of your yesterdays... lovely.....fine flowing piece...refreshing to the heart... 10+++
Reminiscence..sometimes..it numbs the pain we feel inside..replaced by the past memories of freedom of love that was once acclaimed... This poem..lifting emotions of longing and passion at the same time.. Truly a masterpiece!
wonderful write kesav saab.....how often do we return indeed to places we've shared with loved ones only to be weighed down with sadness and disappointed at the loss of some purity...but youve not let this peice go down that road youve given it an uplifting romance with the olive tree...making peace with your past.
Romance & Nature...the dynamic poetic duo...Memories still strong...always alive...like the Evergreen...Excellent penning, my friend. You are indeed a deep-woven writer of the Heart....! FjR
I love the blend of romance and nature - so fresh and sweet. Delicious poem, Kesav, very enjoyable. A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn
evergreen lines...effusing the particles of love and encircling the spirit with the celestail orb of memories
What a peaceful poem. I find it amazing how some birds mate for life. Surely they would write such a poem too..if they wrote. (smile)