Thursday, April 3, 2008

The Evergreen Remains Comments

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Under an olive tree
On the shore of sea
Hand in hand eye in eye
We used to sit, long back
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Patti Masterman 18 August 2009

What a peaceful poem. I find it amazing how some birds mate for life. Surely they would write such a poem too..if they wrote. (smile)

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 10 August 2009

was a like a song in the sea shore...brought to me memories of the past...beautiful very romantic....10

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Mamta Agarwal 15 March 2009

very romantic, nostalgic poem Kesav. its so beautiful going down memory lane and try to recapture those utterly blissful momemts of first flush of love. its very lyrical in content and composition. loved it 10 Mamta

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premji premji 13 March 2009

ruins of love.......................

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Winnie Angel 09 March 2009

its a wonderful piece abt one's love and sweet rememberence abt the air that fills the environ of the special moments one spend! ! ! !

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Vaibhav Pandey 10 February 2009

the memories of love are always evergreen......a beautiful write..10

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Seema Aarella 09 February 2009

Those beautiful moments of intimate love....certainly remains evergreen, through the times.....refreshing our thoughts, re-inventing the lost glory of then innocent love, everytime our mind resorts to its shelter......A superb write! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Reshma Ramesh 09 February 2009

wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! u set the mood alright.................beautiful..........

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Miriam Maia Padua 08 February 2009

lovely piece.. beautiful picture...sweet song merging in your piece.. a wonderful memories....worth remembering until the end of time... the remnants are still there...a living remembrance of your yesterdays... lovely.....fine flowing piece...refreshing to the heart... 10+++

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Deepti Agarwal 15 January 2009

lovely picture..... weaved with loving beautiful words..

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Sandra Martyres 06 January 2009

Beautiful poem Kesav...very skillful use of imagery...

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Little Morning Star 16 December 2008

beautiful poem.. keep on going friend..

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Min Sia 16 December 2008

Reminiscence..sometimes..it numbs the pain we feel inside..replaced by the past memories of freedom of love that was once acclaimed... This poem..lifting emotions of longing and passion at the same time.. Truly a masterpiece!

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 02 December 2008

wonderful write kesav saab.....how often do we return indeed to places we've shared with loved ones only to be weighed down with sadness and disappointed at the loss of some purity...but youve not let this peice go down that road youve given it an uplifting romance with the olive tree...making peace with your past.

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<font color =fusha>Amy 24 November 2008

Both nature and romance cobined lovely poem :)

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 23 November 2008

Romance & Nature...the dynamic poetic duo...Memories still strong...always alive...like the Evergreen...Excellent penning, my friend. You are indeed a deep-woven writer of the Heart....! FjR

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 20 November 2008

wishful...beautiful..innocent... a 10+++

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Marilyn Lott 25 October 2008

I love the blend of romance and nature - so fresh and sweet. Delicious poem, Kesav, very enjoyable. A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Gargi Saha 19 October 2008

A wonderful love poem with nice imagery.u get 10++

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Chitra - 19 October 2008

evergreen lines...effusing the particles of love and encircling the spirit with the celestail orb of memories

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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