Tuesday, May 22, 2012

The Ever Changing Tide Comments

Rating: 4.9

The metronome for life remains the ever changing tide
Flowing in and ebbing out with ever constant stride
Wearing down the barriers that keep the seas constrained
With unsurpassed tenacity, its nature is ingrained
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Richard Lackman
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Smoky Hoss 31 May 2012

There is great power in the waters, and great power in life, and yes these are great words in a poem.

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Heather Wilson 23 May 2012

Yes the sea may well take much of the world from us, (in its own time) a great poem.

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