Wednesday, October 21, 2020

The Evening Was In Breeze Comments

Rating: 5.0

The evening was in
Breeze
And a cluster of nightingales
In competition
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Emmanuel George Cefai
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Ratnakar Mandlik 11 November 2020

Fantastic imagery and display of romanticism. Congratulations on Poem of the Day.

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Mahtab Bangalee 11 November 2020

the evening dark and the lights around, the breeze and the smell of wine around, the friend and sweet conversation around, the music of winds and beauty around- all are the romantic feelings; beautiful poem shared; congrats for being selected this poem as POD...5*****

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Mahtab Bangalee 11 November 2020

The moon raised its head To see us two You and I my friend: We both drank wine Sipping slowly No need of dance Satyrs and fauns Nymphs and Graces We just had wine And That was enough: /// beautifully described the tranquilized evening breeze;

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Khairul Ahsan 11 November 2020

The poem gets the highest rating from me,5 stars ***** Heartiest congratulations on your porm's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'.

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Khairul Ahsan 11 November 2020

A beautiful description of a peaceful 'evening in breeze'! 'And we three sat there Hearing midnight strike and The after-hours: Sometimes a rattling Skeleton: We saw We heard We three of us Originally sipping wine.' - Loved the way the poem came to an end.

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 November 2020

Evening! ! ! Muse of the night! ! ! ! ! ! Drinking wine. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 November 2020

when you have one sip too much, you can no longer distinguish everything properly, then the strangest things happen, especially after midnight and in the after hours. Crystal clearly composed cutest creation with a bottle of wine constantly greatest celebration......5 Stars Full Vote! CONGRATULATIONS being The Member Poem Of The Day. Hooray!

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Deluke Muwanigwa 11 November 2020

Beautiful. I love the double meaning of sate. Phonetically sounds like the psst tense of sit but its also referring to sateity....satisfaction....rest...relaxed and enjoying. Great poem. And of course the moon joining in the fun is just perfect metaphor

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Emmanuel George Cefai

Emmanuel George Cefai

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