Tuesday, December 17, 2013

The Evening Star Comments

Rating: 5.0

The grapevine had rare gossip to relate:
Dazzling degree, merit and medal,
The speed at which he'd won corporate weight,
How deep he'd pushed career's speed pedal,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 July 2019

Beautifully crafted and well executed write. The Poet's Notes are as beautiful as the poem. Very informative.

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 July 2019

As I have said in one of my sonnets, creating a poem and cheselling out a figurine from a stony chunk are comparable. A poem has to be crafted after it is born in the heart, its essence captured. A piece of prose one can write in any which way he likes. Thank you

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 July 2019

A wonderful, insightful and perceptive poem imbued with wisdom. Oftentimes we see this kind of person in the corporate ladder and in politics.They want all the recognition and accolades. Granstanding......they thought that no one could perform the job better.They don't know that in life someone will always come better than us...

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 July 2019

I don't know how to thank you dear poet for digging out as if from deep mines this old poem of 2008 and reading it thoroughly and commenting.

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Godhra - Gujarat
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