Sunday, August 4, 2019

The Evening Star Comments

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It's the same star I saw in the east
behind the curtains of sunlight it moved to west
at the dawn it invited me for the worship of an unseen
at the dusk it looked lonely for some time
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Mahtab Bangalee 05 August 2019

Look at her she is completely exposed in the rains, She will remove your pains.../// She and the She the Love the remover of, the rubber of all pains inside pains...........///

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Khalida Bano Ali 05 August 2019

Great thoughts great poem so nicely penned.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 August 2019

Your imagery about love the moon the woman are or is beyond imagination of poets like me non entity but read still by so many and in Q 4ever behind you a cloud II am simly following when will you if ever discover me O PH JI

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Jane Campion 04 August 2019

Imaginative and fuelled with images of dreams. Thank you for such welcome comments.

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