Tuesday, August 6, 2013

The Even Comments

Rating: 5.0

Out of rage he rose to smite his brother.
What strength lie your arms?
He is but slave to foolish rulership,
what power have you? I asked?
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micheal john
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Pradip Chattopadhyay 06 August 2013

good imagery in this work. liked this poem, michael.10/10.

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Abubakar Abdulkadir 06 August 2013

Bravo! hmm why not let use rightly what God had given us to fight the battle of life so we wont end up strayed like d character in this poem who killed his help (brother) and had to face the blows of life. bravo

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