Sunday, December 9, 2018

The Eternal Sleep. Comments

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She comes to me sometimes, mostly on the nights I throw my little fit and sleep outside on the grass in my sleeping bag.

I close my eyes and take deep breaths and remember the scent, deep breath and then that scent; like some sort of flower with vanilla extract.
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Timothy Goodmansen
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Jazib Kamalvi 16 June 2019

such a nice write, Timothy. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 December 2018

But the taste and silky feel it left on my tongue made it too tempting. Touch me John, and let me go..strange but thought provoking poem. behaviour, vision of life, character.......... a revealing poem. thank u dear poet. tony

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