Wednesday, February 17, 2021

The Eternal Optimist Comments

Rating: 5.0

True blue can you stand the load
Will you tie it up with wire
Just to keep the show on the road
(John Williamson)
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keith brown
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Kim Barney 20 February 2021

I enjoyed reading this very much. Thanks.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 February 2021

'Don't worry, she'll be right mate'. I've just found more bailing wire! An excellent poem about Down Under's Trucking story, whatever happens, they constantly driving on, with much humor and a tinge philosophical truth. Very entertaining as I have mentioned here.I have enjoyed very much

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 February 2021

a very entertaining poem, excellent repetitive structure and regularity to a satisfying ending despite all odd things occurred.5 Stars! Indeed the constant optimist.

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Belle Wassermeister 18 February 2021

A very entertaining story, Keith!

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 18 February 2021

superb and fantastically written about the positiveness of outlook

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Varsha M 17 February 2021

A very beautiful poem. Your poem reminded me of traditional marriage practices of must live the relationship you are bound. Good one into my favourite.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 17 February 2021

Lovely poem. Sometimes we get carried away with faith we miss the science yet all stuff work on science. The forces of nature have to be obeyed. Even by a hardy bunch of Aussies like RM Smith. Good one. Enjoyed it thoroughly

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