Monday, January 23, 2012

The Eternal Journey Comments

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I have to make a long voyage
to wander through the sky lane
under the pavement of Galaxy
I have to reach the firmament
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ramesh rai
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Clarence Prince 23 July 2016

Make my journey of a delightful horse Which can surpass all the obstacle in path. Very good wish indeed!

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Renu Kakkar 24 January 2012

this is indeed very nice...

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Rizvana Parveen 23 January 2012

Good composition.....

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Dave Walker 23 January 2012

A really wonderful poem, a fantastic write. Thankyou so much for your comments about me as a poet. Like you said if it is gods will we will one day meet.

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