Saturday, September 8, 2007

The Eternal Han Shan Ever Returning In James Dean-Like Poets Comments

Rating: 5.0

A new hero emerges
In the flowery light
Of summer dawn,
He rides his bike into the sun
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Uriah Hamilton
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Alison Cassidy 15 September 2007

You give the reader more than a taste of your Han Shan in this fine poem. I've not yet read his words, but after reading yours will certainly seek him out. He has obviously inspired you to open your poetic wings and fly. A fine poem. love, Allie xxxx

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Will Barber 10 September 2007

'The pine sings, but there's no wind. Who can leap the world's ties And sit with me among the white clouds? ' - Han Shan ================ This poem explores new ground. A moment of such awareness is worth more than a lifetime of idle labor. Your title is very fine, as is the poem. You defeat expectations with great brio. The imagery astounds.

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Goldy Locks 10 September 2007

So many stories that have been silenced, i can't even fathom. This was wise, Uriah. and foretelling. best care bud, sjg

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