The Eternal Flame Comments

life is a journey n after comletion of this journey we have to enter into another. a great philosophical write

life is a journey n after comletion of this journey we have to enter into another. a great philosophical write

Right to the point! And so well done. Very good.

An enjoyable snippet; loved the concept, but wished you had further explored the depths of it; it left me wanting much more of your perspective, instead of forcing me to fill in the blanks. -Joe Breunig, Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory

And burning bright eternally in it's everlasting glow. Great poem Dave

Eternal soul burns its way.

Short but sweet and true. Well done Dave.

This is the most beautiful short time I have read of late, Mr Dave Alan.Thanks for sharing.

oh how I agree with those few words. From one life to another nice thoughts

Profound and ever true, thus our immortality. Brief and brilliant

The eternal flame is God (He revealed Himself to Moses) -great poem

Hello Dave beautiful poem and great message well done

excellent Dave. Much said in a few words.

excellent Dave. Much said in a few words.

Soul is the essence of life, its flame keeps on burning!

souls don't burn out, they move from life to life. penned the life's renewal with such brilliant brevity, Dave.