Wednesday, August 3, 2016

The Eternal Dance - A Poem By M.N. Hopkins Comments

Rating: 5.0

Freedom is what you all seek

And freedom will you have
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Michael Hopkins
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Timber Koleden 01 June 2025

Great poem! The best poem of yours I have read yet! You have great poems! Keep writing!

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Rebecca Navarre 28 May 2025

And Congratulations on this master piece! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 28 May 2025

Absolutely breathtaking! .. Deeply inspiring! .. So beautifully shared! .. Beyond #'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 28 May 2025

To the next generation So that They may grow their own trees! .. Ever so moving! .. Ever so beautiful spiritually! ..

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Sandra Feldman 26 April 2024

An extraordinary poem. Immortality, advanced. Written with life's unending dance,

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M. Asim Nehal 09 April 2023

Freedom, a very misunderstood term. Yes free mind and soul always enjoy togetherness and dance in tango. Crafty poem.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 21 February 2023

The Eternal Cosmic dance. Brilliant work, Michael

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 December 2022

A wonderful spiritual write. Very inspiring.

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David Wood 19 December 2021

Most, not all have freedom to choose. Making the right choice is the key.

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Von Klassique 11 November 2021

Great great! Powerful insight ❤️💡

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 October 2021

Undeniable truth.....liked it

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Emmanuel Joseph Olumakiss 24 October 2021

Outstanding piece of work dear poet

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 August 2021

Very poignant and persuasive writing. As you sow, so you reap, is the eternal truth. More serene, down to earth, it is said we don't know who planted the tree the fruit of which you had today. Nor can you be sure who will enjoy the fruit of the seedlings you've planted

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Chinedu Dike 22 June 2021

Well conceived and nicely brought forth with conviction. An insightful creation....

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Indira Renganathan 25 March 2021

Wonderful...an amazing poem on life and creation....top marks

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Indira Renganathan 25 March 2021

Wonderful...an amazing poem on life and creation....top marks

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Dominic Windram 08 April 2020

I think this epic poem is profoundly philosophical and indeed spriritual...well done Michael. It's a 10 from me!

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Denis Mair 21 December 2019

Indeed, fruits of creation are the poignant experiences of living things. Such fruits are enjoyed unto themselves, and they also make possible the emergence of more fruits. This is a prayerful, celebratory poem- -almost a secular liturgy.

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Kenneth Maswabi 21 October 2019

It is a beautiful eternal dance...full of hope and Love. Thanks for sharing.

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A B Faniki 08 August 2019

Nice free verse poem wit bit of rhyme spread across it 2 brin out a rhythm on subject-life n it end

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