Freedom is what you all seek
And freedom will you have
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Absolutely breathtaking! .. Deeply inspiring! .. So beautifully shared! .. Beyond #'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++
To the next generation So that They may grow their own trees! .. Ever so moving! .. Ever so beautiful spiritually! ..
An extraordinary poem. Immortality, advanced. Written with life's unending dance,
Freedom, a very misunderstood term. Yes free mind and soul always enjoy togetherness and dance in tango. Crafty poem.
Most, not all have freedom to choose. Making the right choice is the key.
Very poignant and persuasive writing. As you sow, so you reap, is the eternal truth. More serene, down to earth, it is said we don't know who planted the tree the fruit of which you had today. Nor can you be sure who will enjoy the fruit of the seedlings you've planted
Well conceived and nicely brought forth with conviction. An insightful creation....
Wonderful...an amazing poem on life and creation....top marks
Wonderful...an amazing poem on life and creation....top marks
I think this epic poem is profoundly philosophical and indeed spriritual...well done Michael. It's a 10 from me!
Indeed, fruits of creation are the poignant experiences of living things. Such fruits are enjoyed unto themselves, and they also make possible the emergence of more fruits. This is a prayerful, celebratory poem- -almost a secular liturgy.
It is a beautiful eternal dance...full of hope and Love. Thanks for sharing.
Nice free verse poem wit bit of rhyme spread across it 2 brin out a rhythm on subject-life n it end
Great poem! The best poem of yours I have read yet! You have great poems! Keep writing!