These terraces and pillars are pitted with
the dying screams of generations
and where I sit base instincts
grew with every final pained breath.
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Hi Bill, A monumental poem, suits the form and should that be, 'blood soaked', in the 5th stanza? The Eternal Circle, surely does take some strange turns, but always comes back around in the end it seems. You paint the picture, so realisticly. 9 from Tai
For me another masterpiece. Regards, Lucy