The Essence Of Transience Comments

A good start with a nice poem, Atashi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

A fine and lofty verse, well articulated and elegantly brought forth in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. Beautiful work of art written with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing Atasha and do remain enriched.

Welcome to PoemHunter! A powerful and nice imagery is drawn in this poem with beauty of expression. Waves come and go and thoughts vibrate in mind. Feeling some essence, fragrance of time and life is wise. Love gives laughter and smile with tenderness. At every moment we feel Divine. We feel God's; love and grace through nature. This is an excellent poem...10

desperately try to capture moments That come and go, Smile, fun, laughter, love Are just glimpses on the shore.....permanence, transitory presence.... philosophical poem and so true......only one who meditates can reach to such truths........ thank you. you are spiritual and philosophical.. thank u dear poet. tony