Thursday, October 9, 2014

The Essence Of My Mother's Existence Comments

Rating: 4.5

I enter the quiet,
The quiet of my mother's heart,
A silence aged and deep.
She dwelled within this hush,
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RAJESH.C BOSE
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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 19 September 2015

Dear poet, this is very beautiful and very moving poem. Thank you so much for writing this with all honesty and passion. Glad that finally you have opened the final box that ended your search and questions.

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 October 2014

Beautiful poem though a painful one. It seems that words are so real and poured out from your heart. In it was a long poem Written in blood an tear The hidden treasure was in it It was the life of my mother Now, I know the reason of her depression. It was really a hidden treasure, which she kept it to herself. That was the most painful part she couldn't share her pains with anyone. Many times life go this way too. By the time one understand the reality, its really too late. A heartfelt write.

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Valsa George 16 October 2014

A deeply moving write.... The thoughts of a mother who couldn't give much joy to her children as her life was stifled by her husband who neither cared her nor left any feelings of bond in his children. Your mother's silent pain which she transferred into her poem, you could now read and so you are capable of having a greater probe into her closed heart!

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