Thursday, December 7, 2006

The Essence Of Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

we are growing old together
time is passing fast
our youth was left behind ages ago
nothing does ever last
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Arti Chopra
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Asma Bahrainwala 07 December 2006

a nice poem, arti... i liked the last stanza...the essence of the poem... Asma...

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 07 December 2006

Arti>>>a gemstone of a poem....Life's evolution, so eloquently assessed & expressed...What we lose physically due to time, we gain mentally with our lifelong experience...Well done, my friend frank/fjr

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John Tiong Chunghoo 07 December 2006

good one arti. haiku for you; time helps us to hold on to reality

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Tranquil Ocean 07 December 2006

This is perhaps your best poem, Arti... Beautifully structured and giving lovely advice. Love, TO

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