we are growing old together
time is passing fast
our youth was left behind ages ago
nothing does ever last
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Arti>>>a gemstone of a poem....Life's evolution, so eloquently assessed & expressed...What we lose physically due to time, we gain mentally with our lifelong experience...Well done, my friend frank/fjr
good one arti. haiku for you; time helps us to hold on to reality
This is perhaps your best poem, Arti... Beautifully structured and giving lovely advice. Love, TO
a nice poem, arti... i liked the last stanza...the essence of the poem... Asma...