Saturday, April 21, 2018

The Escape Goat Comments

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My mother was dead when I was born.
You purchased me and brought me at your home
your wife always treated me like her son
and your son always loved me as his younger brother.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Edward Kofi Louis 05 February 2019

Darkness is increasing! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 April 2018

Your love is now scattered on the soil darkness is increasing I am feeling pains in breathing....sparkling expression! A beautiful poem! Thanks dear sir for sharing...10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 April 2018

A thought provoking poem beautifully crafted. A vivid portrayal of a manipulative man. A well executed write.

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Khalida Bano Ali 21 April 2018

The selfish man, so nicely described.

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