Wednesday, March 14, 2018

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Trying to describe your tiny heart becomes nearly impossible...
Certainly, it is sorrowful;
Indeed - pitiful;
With this is mind
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Bill Cantrell 14 March 2018

The destructiveness that comes with jealousy removes any peace and joy, they are indeed crafty as your poem points out..uncanny ability to make things disappear...a sad poem but some poems need to confront issues, very well put my friend.

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Theodora Onken 26 March 2018

Thank you Bill! i so appreciate the fact that you read my poetry. It means more than you know.

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