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This poem is Terrific. You are a very good writer. Keep it up. Its worth it totally. I may only be a TEEN but i know a masterpiece when i see one

what a masterpiece, it's very great.

'You’re everywhere even God couldn’t erase...” I am not an authority to comment on this great work... This poem is definitely like a painting by a great artist of all times... I am honoured and immensely pleased to read this poem... Thank you

I have read your poem i admire that it is better than mine. Thank for sharing

A very great work of yours and, you've written this poem with a higher magnitude. Keep it up. Thank you. E.K.L.

this is like a soap opera or epic it is so dramatic with great language

10 for this new lovely poem.

Two words, one (10) WELL DONE! ! ! ! !

A poem for all lovers. Well done. I agree with Timothy, it does vaguely remind me, too, of the work of the Troubadours of the 23th and 13th centuries. Very well done. Keep writing!

you sound so sincere that it pulls strongly for your work this poem reminds me vaguely of the work of Troubadors of the 12th and 13th centurys 10/10 Timothy

wow/....quite descriptive...us upstaters can appreciate the niagra falls reference...this poem reads almost as a prayer in certain parts...10/10..check out mine if ya get a chance

Beautiful piece, Sulaiman.The only antidote for love is to close your two eyes and dive into it.Afterall if love does'nt kill a poet, nothing will.

“Oh Almighty, you create love, But where’s the antidote? What a brilliant creation! ! ! Its true there is no antidote! ! Once again I m reminded of something today....! ! ! 10/10

a piece of art i love it

Brilliant! Left in awe!

Left breathless from a blow of brilliance, Even the ignorant would agree, that the heart and soul of a natural poet a born within thee, you have managed to harnessed this power and learned to set it free, In the realm where dreams and dreamers lie in harmony... within the beating hearts of others. Cudos, I immensly(sp?) enjoyed reading this.

This i enjoyed you say it all untill next time.

Sulaiman, there's so much to say about this poem, i can't possibly exhaust all my thoughts without spending upon hours trying to say what I would like to say. But this will suffice - I look out into space and feel the thoughts you've expressed and i thank God I'm alive to read this beautiful work that envelops me in warmth and softness, even if here and there there are some gaping holes of sinister coldness form down under in Niagra Falls. Thanks, Sulaiman, thanks, this 10 multiplied by all the beauty of rainfall. Mark, your friend

It is almost suspenseful... quite literally. Good work. It is a 8.

The last line is imposing - FAITH & PRAYER