Sunday, October 16, 2016

The Epidermis Attraction Comments

Rating: 5.0

Attractive she looks
Well made up than a Christmas tree
The beholders eyes have been conned
Of her true age and her birth complexion
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Rose Kanana
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Rose Kanana 17 October 2016

Thanks for your comments and expressed opinions all...literature reflects the society we live in.

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Grace Wachuka 16 October 2016

This is beautiful you pen so well

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Ruth Nyokabi 16 October 2016

Poetess, this is some candid truth, i like the way you have chosen words to address the external beauty, its costs and yet fake to the society-Kudos. Behind the make up we see a deflated ego Behind the make up we see a person in need of society approval Behind the mask we see external beauty And begin to doubt the internal beauty Fake it darling to the very end Fake your heavy accent too to match the mascara you wear Fake it to the alter but for sure you wont fake it to the grave But your facelifts will be done at your own cost

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Collins Waswa 16 October 2016

Oh Rose! you must really be an intelligent poetess.Your choice of words and exploration of euphemism has been wealthy in this poem.A standing ovation for you for this poem. A sensitive poem but rich in content..a 10+++ for this

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James Mwenda 16 October 2016

The world is changing drastically, people are thriving in fakeness...good poem Rose we hope that ladies can stick to our natural beauty

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Charity Karimi 16 October 2016

Fake beauty well brought out, good one Rose.

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Laurie Van Der Hart 16 October 2016

This is brilliant, Rose! An unusual topic, yet so needed. Cleverly written - well done!

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