Wednesday, February 12, 2020

The Entire Gift Comments

Rating: 5.0

The future walks ahead of us
At a bit more handshake length
Spot it early keen and clean
Follow with feet in strength
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 24 February 2020

Future and hope. A very well crafted poem.10+++

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Kesav Easwaran 24 February 2020

Yes. Thank you, Akham Singh, for your good words on my piece

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 February 2020

Forward march! ! ! Hope is the key, Towards the future.

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Kesav Easwaran 24 February 2020

Thank you Edward. Yes hope is the key. Nice feedback

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 February 2020

Another poem of great depth. Philosophical, insightful and imbued with wisdom. Yes, hope is future indeed. It can propel us to change the past for a better future. A brilliant write very well crafted and conveyed. Onto my Poem List.

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Kesav Easwaran 13 February 2020

Good words on my poem, good gesture yours. Thank you very much, Rose Marie. Liked

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Indira Renganathan 12 February 2020

Indeed we should make use of the present before it becomes the past which is one more step on our move with hope for tomorrow...so every today is definitely a precious gift for us to make use of....lovely work 10

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Kesav Easwaran 13 February 2020

Yes, a precious golden egg. Let us follow the duck with hope. Nice observation Indira. Immense thanks. Liked

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 February 2020

Hope is the best option in life. We may constantly hope and never give up.Hope is the future and The present- its entire gift. A poem full of bright light, amazingly worded. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem, Kesav. A 10 Topscore

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Kesav Easwaran 13 February 2020

Yes. Hope is the light that leads. Thanks Sylvie for your good comment. Liked

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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