Monday, June 2, 2008

The Enormous Penis Of Nothingness Comments

Rating: 5.0

Just when you think of writing
A halfway decent poem,
It hits you over the head
Like a ruthless giant hotdog
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Alexander Shaumyan
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Bri Edwards 05 October 2023

' I used to have an old [ 'old' as in his age ] PH Friend, a REAL friend & good poet, in English & Russian, living in Moscow. Have you heard of Valentin Savin?

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Bri Edwards 05 October 2023

***** FIVE stars from your new fan. DAMN! PH claims I 'voted before'; I think PH lies! ! Well, I do also at (appropriate) times. And I have poem(s) about King Kong btw. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 05 October 2023

Alexander, your last [[ I hope not you absolute LAST ]] line also 'made me laugh. I 'must' read one more poem from you tonight, The Gigantic Penis of Nothingness willing (it to be) !

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Bri Edwards 05 October 2023

'Pantheistic' means 'showing or holding a belief in many or all gods, or the belief that God exists in, and is the same as, all things, animals, and people within the universe '..or something else!

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Bri Edwards 05 October 2023

This line, 'Spreading its brand of destruction And uniformity-' piqued my interest. I'd like to communicate with you, Alexander, but after 15 years you are likely dead, missing, or crushed by The Enormous Penis Of Nothingness, all of which could 'be the same thing'. : ((

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Bri Edwards 05 October 2023

The end of Stanza 4 gave me a hearty laugh. Thanks!

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Bri Edwards 05 October 2023

Stanza # 3' This poem is (nearly) priceless, AND I'm (almost) shocked that I, Bri, am not its author. However I did recently 'publish' one on PH { no, not PenisHunter } which deals with penises.

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LOVEFOOL Aka 02 June 2008

A very funny poem with much truth I enjoyed this work a lot Thank you Nik

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Alexander Shaumyan

Alexander Shaumyan

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