The 'Enlightened' Club Comments
What happens to a soul who is 'Illuminated'?
Anger, sadness, fear, pride completely abated
When such energies exit, a vacuum is created
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A lovely penning what I love, love you too who can think so and wish all the people think in similar way to establish the peace all over. Thank you for sharing this. You may read my poem Enjoy being a complete you
The message is powerful but the essence is lost because of your focus on wanting it to rhyme thus forcing the rhymes. a poem does not have to rhyme, infact some of the best poems do not rhyme. This can be a very powerful and positive poem perhaps you can review it. You just need it to flow with a chosen meter. I look forward to reading more of your poems.
you and me-ing huh Biz....hmmmm must learn to reach the verbal heights of assimilation as you have! ;) lol I enjoyed your piece Monk and love the message.
Bravo Poet.....Let me in on this Club....I am sure i'll be happy.....You defined happy so well....
A great club in which to be. Enlightenment is is a gift we should all be aiming for.
I want to join that club and be a lifetime member, to give is to receive a beautiful soul, that lives with love that flies to unkown places and brings joy to many faces! !
Wow! A cool write! If an Enlightened soul becomes compassion, all love There's nothing to stop us from joining that club
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7/20/2025 8:08:14 PM # 1.0.0
...wonderful message, and best club to join ★