Tuesday, November 26, 2013
The Enigma Of My Mind Comments
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The subtle loneliness that hath,
Built its walls were crumbling,
As I ventured into that path
Of needs and belonging.
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Lucifera Santez
26 November 2013
And those unspoken fears Doused by happy tears. wonderful lines. loved it. please read some of my poems and comment. :)
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7/18/2025 7:39:46 PM # 1.0.0
A fine poem that discusses a state of mind inevitably arising out of a strategic outlook.. The rendering too is fine. I feel that you may better replace 'hath' by 'has' as a lone odd word has nothing to do with the ensuing lines.. It is up to you Avinash. Keep writing.