Friday, February 24, 2006

The Engine Of Creation. Comments

Rating: 3.1

Dismiss your trusted instruments
and discount the conscious dialog.

Hidden in your brain resides
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John Kipling Lewis
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K Holoholo 06 November 2007

I don't like it, It never does grab me or draw me in.

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Kath Moore 05 November 2007

3. A lot of abstractions and telling. (Side note: 'its', not 'it's'. I deducted a point for that.)

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John Kipling Lewis

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