Monday, August 25, 2014

The Engagement Ring Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh! black clouds,
Go from here,
I don't want thunders,
I don't want lightning,
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Khalid Saifullah 22 March 2017

A touching story nicely penned........................................................

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Farhan Mirza 09 June 2015

This is a amazing.....

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Farhan Mirza 09 June 2015

This poem is beautiful, I loved it, good work.

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Valsa George 30 August 2014

Another lovely poem! And the red stone, Of my golden ring, Appears to me, A drop of blood, That has frozen in a shape, Of a human heart, .................... Beautiful lines! The portrait of a girl standing lonely lost in memories of her lover far away at the sight of her engagement ring, while other girls of her age in a festive mood sing and dance is beautifully painted here!

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Sarmad Mirza 27 August 2014

how beautiful it is Soo lovely

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Khalida Bano Ali 25 August 2014

A lovely description of a girl engaged in a teen age and silently loving and awaiting her lover and feeling pains without him in the rains.

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Bill Cantrell 25 August 2014

amazing poem in the fullest sense, love the rhythm of pace changes, very good poem.

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