* The Enemy Within~* Comments

Your imagery is profound. Lovely write.

well penned message-thank you for sharing this well written poem

A very truthful poem, my friend reality is emphasized in your poem very symbolic and a piece to make us meditate and examine our conscience, ourselves on what we should ought to do in life... We as being just human....great write, my friend hope to read more works from you.. thanks for everything, my friend..thanks for your poetry book..it's something for anybody to treasure forever..

THIS IS VERY TRUE THE ENEMY IS WITHIN OURSELVES IF WE CANNOT CONTROL OUR DESIRES WOW, YOU WRITE SO WELL THIS IS VERY MEANINGFUL AND SYMBOLIC NICE POEM

yes...desires- they make you hungry...make you commit...commit sin...make you eat the forbidden fruit... good poem...brings out the heaviness of heart beautifully...10

They aren't sins and there isn't any enemy within: maybe only in poetry, you're a good guy.Exotic air.Fine poem.

im reading a bit of Paradise Lost in your poem; but you neglected to extend to the future of hope; and the greates gift to mankind, God's love

this is expressive..once we can't control the desires, it will lead to destructions, and if it kills our good minds, that is the enemy that kills ourself...nice my sweetheart..hope ur fine...

wow loved it a question tho does this have anything to do with addiction