The Enemy Within Comments

A new angle to view love but the panorama is not so pleasing. Better look inwardly. You have come up with a good poem comprising new idea, Catrina. Good Wishes Naseer

The Enemy Within..so simple t but there is also a confusion within. It is a struggle..to be or not to be..We have to be careful what to do, what to decide...As you said here, ' leap frogs form the high rise' And when we are down, we must be sure to have somebody to lif us up. Very nice piece.I love this..as I always love all your works.

very nice shaping the love picture i like it and it's really true

She leapfrogs from the high rise – a sky scraper’s dive Jeopardizing domain, gambling all – on love’s name marvelous..and heart clicking idea and words...pictographic effects and meaningful thought and I agree with you and say...yes she believes in love..the one who stay inside you.. enjoyed it very much..liked it 10/10

A picture perfect picture of the highs and lows of love-at any age.

A picture perfect picture of the highs and lows of love-at any age.

You portait the power of love that can elate or destroy in adequate few lines very loud indeed...a big teenager problem too as the baird explained+++++++10 uavanice1 regards

read and understood your undoubted skills. shan

The enemy within which I believe is yourself. If there is a failure in one's love life, it's only you to be blamed, nobody else. So next time learn by your mistakes. Choose carefully and intelligently.That's my advice young ladies and that goes to male population too.Great write Cathy...three cheers.

Love can indeed be antithetical to reason. A fine write.

wait...might my wrds will not fit the theme, but this is what i want to write my dearest...some are making love as gambling..it means there are money matters involve, , and these kinds of people are more that dangerous, notorious or criminals..they can make these people dance by their influence..choose the right to be a partner...if i were to be asked? hmmmm, the kindest the better and simple is the best....simple people are not greedy, they are contented by their simple choices and wishes..unknown to others, simple people are easy to deal with...your piece is nice and intersting to read..cheers

She leapfrogs from the high rise – a sky scraper’s dive Jeopardizing domain, gambling all – on love’s name...love is gamble and one has to take it bearing full consequences in mind.. it should also beborne in mind that it demands sacrifice and dediction and for sure nothing in return.... well devoted to love in purest form..i admire it and love its contents....10

Misuse of love makes matters worse than better, a matter all have to think about!

Yes there are sins eating our flesh in the name of love so sweet these little sins Sweeter than sugar the enemies within.... continue the collection I love this.....

Love takes you to life's skyscrapers but at times make you dive down desperate...short sweet poignant write...thanks...10

wow, great work, wonderful words thanks a lot 10+

The enemy within, in most cases, is the face looking back at ours everytime we stand afront a miror...Love for another may constitute bliss, or passion, which be far more intense in loss...Logic must then make us realize that lost love is not the end of our lives...but nothing more than an experience that was pleasurable for as long as it was meant to be....Either way, irreversable actions are unacceptable & it is our God-Given Gift of Reason that must prevail in tempering Sadness from Despondence......Solid Work Cat! F j R

Oh boy! in the name of love...whatever love means. Good write...