The Endless Train Comments

good new metaphor has not used much by the other poet, with all its depth meaning 10/10

sounds somethin' like a nightmare. or Twilight Zone. " figure eights" ? ? ? ? good luck passengers! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! is one train on the way to Heaven and the other to? ? is there a third coming, headed for Purgatory? which will WE be on? ? ? bri :)

Two train's on different tracks passing each other but still endless train of life moves so fast in right tracks. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned.10