Where I am
Is this my destination
I can't mend my happening
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A deep poem… ‘I need rain/Rain of traverse hope’ Hope keeps us live and alive …nice metaphor …for me bit abstract Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK
Dear Poet, sorry for the delayed response... well articulated and expressed the conflicting chaos of life and mind it remains me of this phrase ' Life is a conflict between reflexes and reflection'. Good one i would rate 9/10