The Endless Ache Comments

good poem. like meredith barr said listen to your heart because my mates say listen to your heart and you know you have made the right choice. just follow your heart and see where it leads/takes you. Love stacey xxx

Always listen to your heart. It is the best friend you'll ever have.

Always like the structure of your poems and how they build with the repetition of a key phrase(just like a riff) . I still think you should stray into(every now and then) lyric wiriting(is there any music in you...do you play an instrument?) . Especially like the idea of the pain mourning and of the resolve of the last line. love Donall