Things ended between us,
Many years ago,
In a queer, tacit, unspoken manner…
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Awesome....each word just plays and makes me feel them...very strange to accept some faces of relations
Human relationships are very deep! If it begins it cannot end mechanically, its memories might continue for generations! Nice emotions and feelings are displayed.
each stanza of your poem is touching. but plz. dont allow things to end. please read my poems and comment. this will encourage me to compose more and more. otherwise i have been composing poem since my childhood and throwing into dustbin saying useless for mankind. i had composed one poem with the title the hymn of mercy and shown to one of my office colleague. he commented, after gitanjali he was reading my poem. that came true when i posted on net. that can you see in the comment box of the hymn of mercy - 7 and similarly i got so many comments from india and abroad.but now i am composing without any expectation. i know i am not english born poet, there may be so many inaccuracy but i am confident that there is less accuracy in my emotion and feeling. your emotion and feelings are nice. i do appreciate. with regards.
'tis nice to read so feelful! ! ! !