Thursday, June 29, 2006

The End Of Time Comments

Rating: 4.1

If our bright sun declines to shine,
And the whole world in darkness sits,
The moon decides to thus resign,
And stars depart and daytime quits.
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Ernestine Northover
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Cecil (cj) Krieger 12 July 2006

My god E. how well i identify with these words... thank you

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Chuck Audette 30 June 2006

Perhaps it'll be a good thing, no more mushy moon, star and sun poems. Loved the flow to this one. -chuck

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Patricia Gale 29 June 2006

A splendid use of rhyme, a wonderful read.

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Esther Leclerc 29 June 2006

A timeless theme... does love live on? Yes, in your poetry, love - and beauty - go on forever. Thank you, Ernestine. Esther, with love : ]

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Brian Dorn 29 June 2006

Ernestine, brilliant use of rhyme to exclaim your point. I hope we never see the end of rhyme (or time) . Great poem! Brian

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Not Long Left 29 June 2006

agreed with duncan you have a certain special quality when it comes to poetry, you remind me of Larkin in the way you rhyme... you are a special poet and are always always a joy to read..... it takes a special poet to manage to use words the rhyme wihout giving the impression that they are bieng used purely for the purpose of rhyme. you a one of the best on this site. best wishes vincent

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Duncan Wyllie 29 June 2006

Now this, to my mind, at least, is just one of the reasons why you are such a fine poet You shine even when our lights go out Love Duncan X

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