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Thursday, May 13, 2010

The End Of The World Comments

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cold spirits whispered me here
small mutters drift twards my ears
floating amidst the words of life
whispering dryly, making it right
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januel l 13 May 2010

i liked the way it flowed, the only part i had a problem with was the end, it just ends, theres nothing and it sounds as if you could not find something and only used 'and its grief' because it rhymed, sometimes an end can be really good if it doesnt rhyme

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