Saturday, October 1, 2022

The End Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

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try to
put it aside
but cannot let it go
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Susan Williams
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 04 April 2023

Your poem speaks- more than the words could mean

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Savita Tyagi 31 January 2023

This just so touches my heart and makes me want to reach out to hold your hand and walk by you. Wishing you peace and good health.

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Nosheen Irfan 27 January 2023

Wo for the beauty of this poem! ! ! It's really hard to let go. Heart touching!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 December 2022

Today I will not put any comment on any of your poems. Let me greet this pure soul. Merry Christmas to you dear poetess....stay always happy and blessed!

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Belle Wassermeister 24 December 2022

A very merry Christmas to you, Susan, and to everyone!

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Belle Wassermeister 24 December 2022

(part 2 of comment) ... by the way, did you know that you are mentioned in Kim Barney's poem 'Riding with the Cowboys'?

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Belle Wassermeister 24 December 2022

Excellent poem, Susan. This is your latest, published almost three months ago. I hope you are well. Please come back and share more with us!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 December 2022

How are you getting now? I do hope sincerely better. God be with you.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 December 2022

Dear Susan, your very sad poems that causes many rolling tears down the cheeks is TODAY on rank 14 of the Top 100 Best Poems by Member Poets. Congrats dear Susan

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Cowboy Ron Williams 29 November 2022

Very nice cinquain, Susan!

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Bharati Nayak 26 November 2022

It is heart wrenching poem.In a few words you say how painful your feelings are.How could I missed reading this poem! At the moment my heart goes to you.

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Rebecca Navarre 26 November 2022

May God be with you Dear

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Rebecca Navarre 26 November 2022

Your poetry has touched so many hearts here and your words have brought so many smiles

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 December 2022

AND.........................TEARS, Darling Becca!

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Rebecca Navarre 26 November 2022

Dear Susan, I wish i knew what words i could say to bring a smile to your heart again

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 November 2022

I hope and pray these words are just imaginative and do not apply to any one. So deeply poignant. A beautiful poem that made me cry.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 November 2022

Five succinct, poignant and touching lines that hit the heart. They are like arrows that dug holes in one's heart creating a void that could never be filled up.

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Kevin Patrick 22 November 2022

I've been away from your works for too long, and still you craft beautiful, humanistic and empathic pieces. A broken hearts a guillotined soul. I hope you are well

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 November 2022

A Huge 5 Stars TOP Score for this greatest sadness. Please let me know, to help you, thank you dear Susan

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 November 2022

Though read much later, dear Susan, your poem of greatest sadness and melancholy still makes me very very sad, I do hope that I can help you now, please let me know through messages.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 November 2022

An insightful piece of work... much appreciated dear poetess.

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