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try to
put it aside
but cannot let it go
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This just so touches my heart and makes me want to reach out to hold your hand and walk by you. Wishing you peace and good health.
Wo for the beauty of this poem! ! ! It's really hard to let go. Heart touching!
Today I will not put any comment on any of your poems. Let me greet this pure soul. Merry Christmas to you dear poetess....stay always happy and blessed!
A very merry Christmas to you, Susan, and to everyone!
(part 2 of comment) ... by the way, did you know that you are mentioned in Kim Barney's poem 'Riding with the Cowboys'?
Excellent poem, Susan. This is your latest, published almost three months ago. I hope you are well. Please come back and share more with us!
How are you getting now? I do hope sincerely better. God be with you.
Dear Susan, your very sad poems that causes many rolling tears down the cheeks is TODAY on rank 14 of the Top 100 Best Poems by Member Poets. Congrats dear Susan
It is heart wrenching poem.In a few words you say how painful your feelings are.How could I missed reading this poem! At the moment my heart goes to you.
Your poetry has touched so many hearts here and your words have brought so many smiles
Dear Susan, I wish i knew what words i could say to bring a smile to your heart again
I hope and pray these words are just imaginative and do not apply to any one. So deeply poignant. A beautiful poem that made me cry.
Five succinct, poignant and touching lines that hit the heart. They are like arrows that dug holes in one's heart creating a void that could never be filled up.
I've been away from your works for too long, and still you craft beautiful, humanistic and empathic pieces. A broken hearts a guillotined soul. I hope you are well
A Huge 5 Stars TOP Score for this greatest sadness. Please let me know, to help you, thank you dear Susan
Though read much later, dear Susan, your poem of greatest sadness and melancholy still makes me very very sad, I do hope that I can help you now, please let me know through messages.
An insightful piece of work... much appreciated dear poetess.
Your poem speaks- more than the words could mean