And long before the dust had settled
he himself had vanished,
no sound had even vaguely
disturbed the morning as it rose.
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Wow, this is truly a great story here. Very strong images Herbert. Nice one. Sincerely, Mary
Awesome poem...difficult topic to tackle. So Christ came back as a female(it seems) interesting I like the idea. It would give those right wingers a welcomed rude awakening.
Oh my goodness...to have my day start with 'To End It All.' This has the sound of a wonderful myth. Very well done, Herbert.
Good poem...about the end of time? Nice smooth read.
I'm not for sure what I think of the poem, but the writing style works for me.
Impressively written. I echo the compliment on the strong imagery. Apocalyptic enough even to inspire Bob Gotti.